Monday, June 15, 2015

The Story of Beautiful Girl by Rachel Simon

The Story of Beautiful Girl by Rachel Simon
Published May 2011 by Grand Central Publishing
Source: my paperback copy and audio copy were both bought and paid for

Publisher's Summary:
It is 1968. Lynnie, a young white woman with a developmental disability, and Homan, an African American deaf man, are locked away in an institution, the School for the Incurable and Feebleminded, and have been left to languish, forgotten. Deeply in love, they escape, and find refuge in the farmhouse of Martha, a retired schoolteacher and widow. But the couple is not alone-Lynnie has just given birth to a baby girl. When the authorities catch up to them that same night, Homan escapes into the darkness, and Lynnie is caught. But before she is forced back into the institution, she whispers two words to Martha: "Hide her." And so begins the 40-year epic journey of Lynnie, Homan, Martha, and baby Julia-lives divided by seemingly insurmountable obstacles, yet drawn together by a secret pact and extraordinary love


My Thoughts:
All of that happens within the first 20 pages of the book. I'm not sure I've ever read a summary that actually tells so little about what's going to happen going forward. After this point, the lives of Lynnie, Homan, and Martha veer apart for forty years and the book spends the next 320 pages following each of their separate journeys.

Lynnie, who is caught, is returned to a system which warehouses and abuses the people it is entrusted to care for. Lynnie is lucky enough to have an ally at the school in Kate, a woman who patiently and secretly sees to it that Lynnie is given a voice, both literally and through her art. Lynnie's way is made easier when first a reporter uncovers the problems at the school, thanks to a type from an anonymous source (Martha), and then she is reunited with the sister she hasn't seen in decades.

Human spends the next forty years finding a place where he can safely live his life, despite his inability to communicate with those around him. Homan hasn't used his voice in years, can't read either lips or print, and uses a sign language no one else understands. He spends forty years alone, saving money for a reason he doesn't even understand, and slowly forgetting Beatiful Girl and Little One (Lynnie and Julia).

Martha, convinced that the only way she can protect the baby entrusted to her care is to run, relies on the students she has stayed in touch with since her retirement. Only Eva, a former student who now runs a store with her husband, will know the full truth. Over the next decade Martha and Julia will travel from place to place, student to student, telling each a different story for how she comes to have a small child with her and moving on when she begins to feel unsafe or it is no longer possible to stay.

When Kate discovers that Lynnie has had a child while she was free, she is determined to find the child. When this leads her to Eva, she and Eva make a pact to tell Lynnie or Martha what is happening to the other only in case of an emergency. Kate is convinced that something terrible will happen to the baby if she is discovered and both feel the baby is safe with Martha's hands. It is the only thread that connects any of the characters during most of the rest of the book. And that was my problem with the book.

While each of the stories was, in and of itself, compelling, the focus often stayed so long on one character that I lost track (and feeling for) the other characters. I'm not sure how the book could have been structured differently and ended with the impact it did (and, despite my trouble having deep feelings throughout the book, it did have an impact), I only wish it had been done differently. I think I would have felt less emotionally manipulated and more emotionally attached to the characters.

8 comments:

  1. I think this is one story best heard, for the audio is absolutely fantastic. It connects the characters and brings them to life in a way that makes them memorable and therefore easier to follow. The emotions you felt make sense because there is no manipulation but rather a real connection to the characters. I loved this on audio. I can see, however, how this story would be less interesting in print.

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    1. This is another one that I had in print and audio and the audio definitely was great. Unfortunately, it was on CD which means I can only listen to it while I'm driving so it's less than an hour a day, or only about 25 or 30 pages. I often feel like that's just not enough time to really get deeply into a story.

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  2. I wonder if the author had alternated more frequently between their lived, if that would have helped? This sounds like such an interesting book. Sad, in many ways.

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    1. I think it would have helped to move back and forth more frequently for me but it might have been harder to write it that way. I think I probably should have spent some time reading it in print as well so I could move through it more quickly and get settled into it more.

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  3. This sounds like a novel that has a lot going on. If the book focuses on more than one story at a time I don't like it to spend too much time on one either. It needs to go back and forth at a better pace or you do lose track or feeling for at least one of the stories. Still I remember seeing this book before and thinking it sounded good but I never did get around to reading it.

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    1. The audio was good and I think I would have enjoyed the book more if I could have listened to more at a time. Sometimes it just takes being able to sit with a book for a couple of hours straight to really get you hooked.

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  4. I've had this book on my shelves for a while but have been super reluctant to read it. From your review, I see that I probably may not enjoy it and it can stay on my shelves for a bit longer.

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    1. I think if you start it and really spend some time with it, you might enjoy it more. Because I was listening to it on CD, I could only get about 25-30 pages a day "read" and that just wasn't enough to really fall into the book.

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